At Vuda Park Poem by Ramanujam Parthasarathy

At Vuda Park

Rating: 5.0


The stick slipped,
He was about to fall,
But his crony crutch supported him
With her fragile frame.
Stumbling, they sat on a bench in a corner,
And I was reabsorbed in my Herman Hesse.
Of course, I am a bird-watcher,
But old birds are not my game.

They came soon enough,
With laughter beyond all reason,
With a charm that could transform a dreary desert -
The natural inhabitants of Vuda Park.
And the waiting eyes began their roving routine.

As the sun slithered further down,
And the scene was shifting to the beach,
I got up as though mesmerized.
But the spell broke:
An unintended glance at the corner scene
Held me back on to the bench.

His shaky hand shuffled towards
Her pale and frail palm
And crawled clumsily into it
The small sunken eyes that leered at her
Gleamed with passion against the crimsoning sky.
But now the woman caught my eye.

The obedient hand flexed, faltered,
And paltered with the shaky hand,
But when the clammy eyes lifted,
I fancy I saw neither fondness nor pity
But accumulated contempt.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written in 1990
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 16 April 2022

The ambience and the underlying emotions have been expressed beautifully.

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Thank you, Ms Nayak.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 April 2022

A magnificent poem at Vuda Park. The superb use of the phrases like, "fragile frame", ‘waiting eyes' and ‘unintended glance' among others makes this poem downrightly poetic and majestic. A beautiful composition…..appreciated.

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Thank you, Dr Swain.

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Dinesan Madathil 19 July 2013

A piece of verse that can rightly boast of apt and powerful diction, immaculate style and the much needed personal touch indeed! Well begun over here and I wish you all the best ahead sir. Thanks for your kind comments.

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Thank you, Dinesh Nair. This poem was actually written many years ago.

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A piece of verse that can rightly boast of apt and powerful diction, immaculate style and the much needed personal touch indeed! Well begun over here and I wish you all the best ahead sir. Thanks for your kind comments.

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