! ! ! At Your Door Poem by Paul Josef

! ! ! At Your Door

Rating: 5.0


I heard thudding as our chests touched,
it was my heart knocking, hoping you'd open yours.
Embrace you forever, if i could...
but it was cold and no one was home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyle Shield Laster 13 July 2008

a nice one. the short writes are my favs... but i'd like it more if it were longer. great write!

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Craig Anderson 15 March 2008

A Class Act.....Like Yoonoos said; What's next. People will be looking. Really really enjoyed. Regards. Craig.

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