Attraction Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Attraction

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Her dress floats elegantly
Under the bright lights
Of the dance floor

Legs sway seductively
To the rhythm
Of UnchainedMelody

His eyes were glued
To her face
Waiting to arrest her eyes
That are so lovely.


Copyright 2017, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Tuesday, January 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: attraction
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aldouz San Antonio 19 March 2018

One of the deepest poems that I had read like it

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Thank you so much, Aldouz for your amazing comment. I feel honored.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 January 2018

Her dress floats elegantly Under the bright lights Of the dance floor....Lovely expression. I liked it..Thanks for sharing!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 January 2018

A wonderful comment, Dr.Dillip. Thank for your visit.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2018

His eyes were glued to her face! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Varsha M 30 July 2021

And indeed I'm attracted to the dress that is so well presented and my eyes are glued at its elegance profound. Beautiful attraction.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 October 2019

Her dress floats elegantly/Under the bright lights/Of the dance floor....scintillating expression! A wonderful work worth reading time and again.....so beautifully penned! I admire your style of penning!

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Anjandev Roy 16 August 2019

That are so lovely. Indeed a lovely poem.Thank u, dear poetess.

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 July 2019

It is like simple strokes of an artist making a portrait, when completed produces a master piece. I don't think anything more needs needless words. Lovely.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 June 2019

Legs sway seductively/To the rhythm/Of UnchainedMelody......delightfully expressed! A brilliant work..........10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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