Auction Poem by Sathya Narayana

Auction

Rating: 5.0


New clearance sale! ! !
Satan brokered the deal
A salvo from nuclear arsenal
Knocked down bid final
Mr. Hades clinched all
Body wrappers are buried
Spirits are…… under dispatch

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rinzu Susan Rajan 29 December 2008

wow...u might have let ur imagination run wild to pen this one... good one really...! ! ! : D

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Seema Aarella 29 December 2008

This means there is an endless supply of imaginative weaponry in your creative arsenal.......an entertaining write from otherwise an intense poet!

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Sandra Fowler 30 December 2008

Amazing imagery. You have a fascinating mind. Ten for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Anjali Sinha 30 December 2008

wow! ! ! ! ! ! a terrific clearance sale! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! so much salvo from your nuclear arsenal a differenet kinda theme--I liked it -10 anjali

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Ency Bearis 31 December 2008

wonderful imagery...a horrifying clearance sale for nuclear arsenal for mass destructions...

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Vaibhav Pandey 13 February 2009

sir, very sarcastic indeed......a great write...

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Catrina Heart 12 February 2009

A unique theme and presentation..Auctioned, clearance sale written so fine with great rhymes...10+++

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 08 February 2009

a very imaginative piece there....opposing the use of nuclear weapons..thankgod at least the spirit is bought over by god

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Eddie Roa 13 January 2009

You have lightened the tone of such a dark and foreboding topic. You have great imagination.

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Dr Kamran Haider 11 January 2009

Wow... Bhayya, what an imagery... You have a great vision... Dark yet wonderful...10 ++++++++

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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