Audacity Of Hope Poem by Lento Maez

Audacity Of Hope

Rating: 5.0


The audacity of hope
Can be a slippery slope
Take care who you follow
That person may be shallow
Beware of false leaders
They may be just cheaters
Stay clear of false sales men
Who entice you with their amen

The audacity of hope
Should widen your scope
Of those you believe
Can help you achieve
Take care who you follow
In mire you may wallow

The audacity of hope
Should not make you grope
May you keep a keen eye
And look up to the sky
There is clarity up there
So please be aware
Or your soul may be bare

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 30 September 2013

The clever and sound warnings correctly encompase the true reality of our trusting hearts. You have so well exposed the need to reflect and not fall for false promises. Great poem that warns and reflects about the pitfalls of our times. I liked it very much.! ! ! ! I read some of your other new poems too and they are all concise but beautifully poetic, prophetic and powerful.So you get 3 Ps today, amigo. I like short, direct poems, that say a lot in just a few lines. You are becoming very proplific in that genre. .

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