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Gregory Gunn
(1/17/2006 10:10:00 PM) |
Max,
Who's attempting their hand at comedy by giving this a 1. I didn't find any major flaws therein.
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Mary Nagy
(8/26/2005 3:09:00 PM) |
I think the last lines were wonderful. I often wonder the same thing. It's hard to imagine you can be happy and have a great life while so much unhappiness and senseless misery is going on around you. Sincerely, Mary
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Raynette Eitel
(8/17/2005 4:10:00 PM) |
I consider this an interesting way to 'build' a poem. Of all the thousands of news events, you chose these few stories to discourage yourself. The last lines do turn this into a poem, in my opinion. Perhaps the only way for your heart to keep 'flowing like a peaceful river' is when you start looking for reasons to be peaceful. I like this poem. Wonder what it would be like if you found four upbeat stories and wrote about them?
Raynette
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Peter A. Crowther
(8/17/2005 1:47:00 PM) |
This is an excellent poem and a perfect ending. Congratulations
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Kathleen Paul-Flanagan
(8/17/2005 1:25:00 PM) |
Max...I haven't been reading much here (Or anywhere) but this is great stuff. I have to admit when I read the first stanza I thought...this isn't for me...I am so glad I kept reading. You have a way of putting stuff down that is personal yet universal....Great stuff...this is not a surprise. I think you're the real thing!
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