Min Sia


Autobiography - Poem by Min Sia

A genuine lad is all I can be
Though deadliest future beholds this limited thee
Yet, even destiny couldn't find his way
And yet, my path couldn't risk any stake
Beyond reasons, facts remains
Chained by reality with consequences and vain
Enthralled memories haunting through
Voices summoning every fool
I am embracing a bleeding tree
Possessing knife for every thee
Drinking through the bloody ocean
Jumping between every thunder
I would like to hang on the highest cliff
Rather than stay with the beat
I am searching for a cold river
Hoping for a endless tranquilizer

For my life lives within one's imprisonment
Even shadow was an unknown existent
Vivid dreams showing boredom
But through paper flows my only freedom...


Comments about Autobiography by Min Sia

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (4/21/2009 6:16:00 AM)

    N i c e and t o u c h y... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (12/13/2008 7:02:00 AM)

    cool one my dear
    you have come a long way-
    and u still have miles and miles to go
    before you. So keep head straight and chin up
    take gods name and DO IT WHATEVER
    --10 regards anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (12/12/2008 10:54:00 AM)

    You have opened your heart here and although your life has been hard so far you are still young, keep positive and keep writing,
    10
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naru Kaede (12/6/2008 12:32:00 PM)

    Such a sad memories, , ,
    Don't give up, okay, still many people love you and your poem, , ,
    They want to read you more write, ,
    They want to see you walk forward, ,
    And I'm still here even just a distance, ,
    Hehehe, , this is the lovely one! very cool!

    Naru Kaede, , (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,634 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (12/6/2008 12:16:00 PM)

    Hello poet friend Min and thank you for sharing a part of your soul and life's journey. Life is filled with difficulties and trials, however, being alive, we can appreciate the fact that we are able to look upon them and learn. Great read, Loyd (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,343 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (11/28/2008 12:26:00 PM)

    Profound pain pouring through your pen
    Yet there is freedon at the very end.
    Good write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (11/27/2008 8:08:00 AM)

    You certainly packed a lot of feelings into these few lines. Sometimes we dream only to find that life itself is a dream. Just hope a happy dream. I hope poetry helps you find a way. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Blue Eyes (11/18/2008 6:33:00 PM)

    wow, i love the use of such words like ''thee, thou, and thus''i feel that though they are dusty but they also carry the genuinity of feelings without being filtered through our brutal machines''minds'' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 87 Points Kesav Easwaran (11/17/2008 8:14:00 PM)

    well written piece...gives impressive reading 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mine Yours (11/16/2008 10:51:00 AM)

    Definitely an amazing read! ! You go girl! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tj Becker (11/16/2008 9:33:00 AM)

    An excellent write. I am glad I fell upon your works. I will be reading many more (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 196 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (11/16/2008 6:59:00 AM)

    Chained by reality with consequences and vain
    Enthralled memories haunting through....................

    ..........................................................................
    Though deadliest future beholds this limited thee

    wonderful imagery by the life, yet most powerful voice that enthrals all, a ingenious glow of unique genre, wellpenned,10++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Viola Grey (11/14/2008 12:06:00 AM)

    that last line is fantastic....keep life in those lines and let them flow...great work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tai Chi Italy (11/11/2008 8:44:00 AM)

    Ok Min! on the merits of my first read of your work, I'd say this is a good start, I enjoyed it and thyme scheme seems to flow well. Keep on writing, the only query I have is that your bio states female? the second line is a beauty too, deadliest futures are us! smiling at you, TAi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (11/9/2008 9:25:00 AM)

    thought provoking......well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tia Maria (11/9/2008 9:21:00 AM)

    Wonderfully weaved words of inner most thoughts which are yours alone and not necessarily for the 'real' world out there - you made me think very deep thoughts :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 548 Points Ency Bearis (11/9/2008 4:40:00 AM)

    cognitive thoughts...well written and expressed..10

    Ency Bearis (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 243 Points Palas Kumar Ray (11/9/2008 2:13:00 AM)

    ____________________________
    Very deep and profound thoughts.
    Words are all very well chosen and
    neatly weaved.
    ___________________________
    (10) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (11/8/2008 11:57:00 PM)

    an introspection of an honest soul........showing the ups and downs of life; wavering thoughts; undeciding mind...very dddeeep and profound.........10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (11/8/2008 11:43:00 PM)

    The freedom of thought consumed with the beauty of your powerful mind, reflects your trueself.Lovely piece Min Sia. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 8, 2008


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