Warren Falcon

Freshman - 801 Points (04/23/52 - xxxx / Spartanburg, South Carolina, USA)

Autumn Haiku - Poem by Warren Falcon


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Comments about Autumn Haiku by Warren Falcon

  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (10/10/2014 2:04:00 PM)

    a nice choice of words and a good metaphor (Report) Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (10/10/2014 2:04:00 PM)

    a nice choice of words and a good metaphor (Report) Reply

  • Jacqui Broad (10/10/2011 12:07:00 AM)

    What an excellent haiku. The sewing machine resembling our life's pattern and the golden thread the people who keep us together... (Report) Reply

  • Baru Gobira (8/3/2010 1:44:00 PM)

    Not too sure what it all means in its entirety. But that is exactly the beauty of a true Haiku of which I'm no expert. I liked it. Baru Gobira (Report) Reply

  • Raj Nandy (3/12/2010 3:46:00 AM)

    Autum is the season of mellowed fruifulness, when the leaves too change into rustty colors and golden hues! Let this golden thread of Nature run through our
    matured Autumnal life, being close to Nature is the better way to survive!
    Thank for sharing!
    -Raj (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/5/2010 2:16:00 PM)

    Short but significant. (Report) Reply

  • Nimal Dunuhinga (12/17/2009 2:35:00 PM)

    It brings the uncertainty of life..............fantastic and.resembles Matsuo Basho's haiku.
    The three lines tell us a very long journey! (Report) Reply








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