***autumn Kissed*** Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

***autumn Kissed***

Rating: 3.3


The brillant orange, it billows-
The tawdry burnt, to brown-
The air 'tis filled with aroma of chestnuts-
And Mesquite wood, fills the breeze, in our town!

'Tis a brillant, crisp, Metamorphis-
As a catapillar to: The Monarch, Butterfly-
It reminds me, of this change, in season-
With the Golden and Dark leaves, blowing in the sky-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marilyn Lott 23 October 2007

Lovely poem to celebrate a lovely season A delicious time of year! I enjoyed it very much! Marilyn

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Theodora Onken 04 October 2007

Doc and Diane, Thank You, Both! Your words ARE always appreciated! Blessings to you both! Always, Theo: 0) xxxx

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Diane Violet 03 October 2007

I like your poem also Theo! Lovely title and I can smell your autumn kissed air and picture autumn kissed monarchs flying there. Hugs, Diane

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Theodora Onken 03 October 2007

Well, Andy from the votes, i see my poem was read by more than you, but no one wanted to comment. i always enjoy comments...whether good or bad, as good constructive critic is always welcomed. I love the Monarch. She is so regal...and yes, her colours-so Fall-like! Thank you for taking the time to read my work! Theo

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 03 October 2007

The beauty of the butterfly, so sweet upon the eye... just like this poem Theo..10

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