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Autumn - Life And Death Surround Us! (My Personal Fave) - Poem by BEAU GOLDEN

I walk in the park and I hold my breath
We are always surrounded by life and death
Old old men playing bowls on the lawn
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Comments about Autumn - Life And Death Surround Us! (My Personal Fave) by BEAU GOLDEN

  • Rookie - 159 Points Maia Padua (8/20/2009 5:28:00 PM)

    very true..
    your personal favorite tells a lot..
    a lot about life and death..about our existence..
    this is a very great concept...great flowing from your mind...fight from your heart...


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  • Rookie Beauty Philosophy (8/11/2009 2:08:00 AM)

    A very beautiful piece of poetry, deep thoughts and an important theme to dwell on. In DEATH one is supposed to see his microscopic shape before the macroscopic universe...Ironically enough, it's the small and tiny worms who become the kings and the queens to feast on our flesh after death...A great lesson to humans in order for them to wake up and adjust their priorities in life... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Seema Aarella (6/19/2009 3:11:00 AM)

    Very interesting....u have brought out the picture of life and death seen in our surroundings every day, we soon neglect the dead and begin to admire the newly springing life.......a routine visible invisible all around us! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie William Stoneberger (3/10/2009 10:28:00 AM)

    definitely did like it. nice contrasts in the images. and as we get older we notice it more and more. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 149 Points Kranthi Pothineni (3/10/2009 1:42:00 AM)

    Yes the imagery work is really well show cased...a wonderful poem to ponder on...the layout of this poem is also made to visualize the park and many more things what you expressed...Crafting is really good (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anita Blake (6/4/2007 10:42:00 PM)

    beautiful poem and i agree with Virginia it goes to show no matter what life marches on. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ted Sheridan (3/17/2007 8:00:00 AM)

    Well I just had to read something by someone who had the balls to call anything I wrote condescensing. LOL. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lisa Emry (2/7/2007 11:42:00 AM)

    Excellent write! Amazing use of imagery and heart. Makes you stop and think about all around us. Good job! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 60,470 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (9/25/2006 2:26:00 AM)

    Beau>>>A Fine Penning, here...Like the structure, crisp & tight...stellar use of imaery...Overall solid Work! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chantelle Clark (7/14/2006 11:44:00 AM)

    Wow, that is a really good poem. I wrote one that was not on life and death but it was about walking through the park and seeing things in a new persepctive. Seeing all the small beautiful things in life. The poem is called Perspective. I really loved this read! (Report) Reply

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