Li Po (701-762 / Chu / Kazakhstan)
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Poems by Li Po : 13 / 112
Autumn River Song
The moon shimmers in green water.
White herons fly through the moonlight.
The young man hears a girl gathering water-chestnuts:
into the night, singing, they paddle home together.
Li T'ai-po
tr. Hamil
Li Po
Submitted: Tuesday, December 31, 2002
Read poems about / on: water, girl, together, moon, green, home, river, autumn, night, song
Poems by Li Po : 13 / 112
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Very deep symbolism here, thanks to Michael Harmon for helping me better understand the poem.
Lipo
Born a Taoist brandishing a sword under the wild pine,
He still could not easily cut and cross the Confucian line.
Unable to bring the cloudy world his political sunshine,
He freely rowed a boat with his sword into poetry and wine.
-a poem about one of the greatest poets in Chinese history, from GOD BLESS NOT ONLY AMERICA by Gordon Tseng
Yes, there is a lot going on here, and kudos to Michael Harmon for his diligent research into the symbols that underlie the imagery of the poem. And even the resolute Kevin Straw is on his best game here with a perceptive interpretation of 'Autumn River.' But let's pause and consider first a few things that crossed my mind about both Li Po and his 'Autumn River Song.'
Is it possible that a much older Li Po (the speaker or persona) is thinking back on his youthful dalliances? I always have the impression that Li Po's persona in his poetry pretty much reflects the poet himself. He does not seem to contrive much of a fictional character that he uses to project his thoughts or feelings. What you read in this case is all there is to say - a man in his dotage identifies with the herons in flight as he recognizes his oncoming death and perceives a beauty in existence almost beyond comprehension!
Much going on here, as one might expect from Li Po.
A bit of previous knowledge and online research led to the following.
In China: both the moon and the autumn season are symbolic of the female principle;
the heron is a symbol of strength, purity, and long life;
the water chestnut is a symbol of unity;
the moon was believed to reach its zenith of beauty in the autumn season;
and the word 'Heron', in Chinese, sounds a lot like the word for 'path or way.'
White, generally, of course, is symbolic of purity, chastity.
Captures the simplicity of boy meets girl
This is a very moving evocation of love's beginning. The green water, the white herons, all under the spell of the moonlight, create a magical atmosphere in which love can flourish. There is sublime tenderness here, the poet is smiling like the moonlight on a burgeoning love. Water - that ancient symbol of renewal - is heard by the young man, and we hear it in the sound of the boat taking the young couple to their destiny. One could unravel the dynamics of this poem for a long time. I cannot remember being so taken by so short a poem. To paraphrase Kallie Madison's comment 'this poem is great, and I love it'.
Beauty of Nature and sweet song give peace in Nature! A wonderful poem relaxing mind!
your poem is great and i like it