Unwritten Soul


Autumn Swing - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Back to the back
Undo and tracking our footprints
Printed on the sand of time
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Comments about Autumn Swing by Unwritten Soul

  • * Sunprincess * (1/19/2014 9:05:00 PM)

    oh I love the symbolism of the leaf changing color as our memory...
    it is a beautiful concept...and so very deep....enjoyed much
    wish it was autumn now with beautiful leaves...but we only have
    bare naked trees...will come back and read this one again... (Report) Reply

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  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (7/30/2013 6:48:00 AM)

    I especially like the title of this poem Autumn Swing. You wrote this
    poem just like the moves in a hypnotic dance. The lines blend in so
    smooth to make for a beautiful write. Life changes just like the seasons.
    New things come to life as old things dies. There is a constant rebirth
    as long as the world exists. Nothing ever stays the same, so does life. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (6/21/2013 1:05:00 PM)

    a great metaphor very poetic. (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Davis (4/2/2013 5:56:00 PM)

    Your lovely poetic comparisons and lavish, effective imagery make Autumn Swing a gratifying reading experience.
    Excellent! (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (12/10/2012 11:58:00 PM)

    oh unwritten soul love the metaphor of the seed as a beginning of a
    friendship and we can watch it grow with love..this is a brilliant write
    and the imagery is superb..oh yea my favourite colours are blue
    and yellow for the sky and sun..nothing beats a beautiful sky. :) (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (6/15/2012 7:15:00 AM)

    Another very emotive poem that uses strong metaphoric
    images and colors to entice and challenge the reader.
    An ingenious blending of many flavors that did not spoil the stew.
    Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (6/11/2012 12:51:00 PM)

    The similes, metaphors are used very nicely.Shades of color denoting the stages of memory are woven nicely..Awesome! (Report) Reply

  • Eric Cockrell (11/26/2011 11:02:00 AM)

    strong, passionate, the hymn of life exploding within and without... the seasons of living and love... well penned! (Report) Reply

  • Cosmic Dreamer Cosmic Dreamer (11/11/2011 8:37:00 PM)

    A vivid dream painted in words... Great poem... (Report) Reply

  • Harindhar Reddy (11/10/2011 11:41:00 AM)

    Dear poetess you rocked I say! you have made it wholesome. I like your approach and the development of ideas.
    'Time running just like a smoke
    Dense, smear, disappear'

    Poem is planned well and drafted well I tried pick some lines very tough job as so many line so fascinating! - especially the implication of colors.. green, yellow.....................

    Good my mind summoned back to my university days where I studied P.B. Shelly's Ode to Autumn. Good work.10++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Ency Bearis (10/22/2011 6:49:00 AM)

    Such a very creative and in vivid write, great piece. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder Bernard Snyder (10/17/2011 11:41:00 PM)

    Another amazing piece of writing 'Soul! This one sounds more 'Shakespearean! ! With more definition and much more polished though. Nicely written! I gave this one a 10' as well. (Report) Reply

  • Shadow Girl (10/10/2011 9:03:00 AM)

    This is so good. Great meaning, sad, melancholy yet happy and reflective...loved it my lil bro'
    -Dr SG! ! !
    xoxoxo (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann Allemagne Roßmann (10/2/2011 12:19:00 PM)

    This is undoubtedly and undisputedly one of the epic writes of poemhunter and time.An Autumn perhaps never had such an Ode before your words here.I wandered in thoughts and for a moment silence ruled the time while i forgot i actually read it from start to end in each stanzas A to B to C and their coherence so well established in a matured poetic hand...Superb write i must say here.. (Report) Reply

  • Amir Forougi (10/2/2011 2:41:00 AM)

    Great sense of regret apathy and lost....But why do you write the themes? ...Let it be vague to the readers (Report) Reply

  • Crimson Love (9/30/2011 11:44:00 PM)

    This is a magnificent poem, with a deep meaning, Very well written! An amazing poem from an amazing poet :) (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty Pranab K Chakraborty (9/26/2011 10:10:00 PM)

    A good writing to guide the life in a positive way to reach a happiest end. Nice blending of Autumn put the nature within. Thank you. Write more...
    Regards,
    pranab (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr Hans Vr (9/26/2011 8:08:00 AM)

    I think this poem's images are very well chosen
    the seeds, the leaves, the colours
    Very meaningful (Report) Reply

  • Raj Arumugam Raj Arumugam (9/25/2011 2:25:00 PM)

    beautiful lines and extensive imagery on a universal topic, Unwritten Soul... (Report) Reply

  • Sharron Stephenson (9/25/2011 6:23:00 AM)

    i love the way you have put the feeling from you heart into soft sweet words keep this up are are really good (Report) Reply










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