Unwritten Soul


Autumn Swing - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Back to the back
Undo and tracking our footprints
Printed on the sand of time
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Comments about Autumn Swing by Unwritten Soul

  • Patricia Grantham (7/30/2013 6:48:00 AM)


    I especially like the title of this poem Autumn Swing. You wrote this
    poem just like the moves in a hypnotic dance. The lines blend in so
    smooth to make for a beautiful write. Life changes just like the seasons.
    New things come to life as old things dies. There is a constant rebirth
    as long as the world exists. Nothing ever stays the same, so does life.
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  • Heather Wilkins (6/21/2013 1:05:00 PM)


    a great metaphor very poetic. (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2013 5:56:00 PM)


    Your lovely poetic comparisons and lavish, effective imagery make Autumn Swing a gratifying reading experience.
    Excellent!
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  • (6/15/2012 7:15:00 AM)


    Another very emotive poem that uses strong metaphoric
    images and colors to entice and challenge the reader.
    An ingenious blending of many flavors that did not spoil the stew.
    Great write.
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  • Neela Nath Das (6/11/2012 12:51:00 PM)


    The similes, metaphors are used very nicely.Shades of color denoting the stages of memory are woven nicely..Awesome! (Report) Reply

  • (11/26/2011 11:02:00 AM)


    strong, passionate, the hymn of life exploding within and without... the seasons of living and love... well penned! (Report) Reply

  • Cosmic Dreamer (11/11/2011 8:37:00 PM)


    A vivid dream painted in words... Great poem... (Report) Reply

  • (11/10/2011 11:41:00 AM)


    Dear poetess you rocked I say! you have made it wholesome. I like your approach and the development of ideas.
    'Time running just like a smoke
    Dense, smear, disappear'

    Poem is planned well and drafted well I tried pick some lines very tough job as so many line so fascinating! - especially the implication of colors.. green, yellow.....................

    Good my mind summoned back to my university days where I studied P.B. Shelly's Ode to Autumn. Good work.10++++++++
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  • (10/22/2011 6:49:00 AM)


    Such a very creative and in vivid write, great piece. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (10/17/2011 11:41:00 PM)


    Another amazing piece of writing 'Soul! This one sounds more 'Shakespearean! ! With more definition and much more polished though. Nicely written! I gave this one a 10' as well. (Report) Reply

  • (10/10/2011 9:03:00 AM)


    This is so good. Great meaning, sad, melancholy yet happy and reflective...loved it my lil bro'
    -Dr SG! ! !
    xoxoxo
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  • Allemagne Roßmann (10/2/2011 12:19:00 PM)


    This is undoubtedly and undisputedly one of the epic writes of poemhunter and time.An Autumn perhaps never had such an Ode before your words here.I wandered in thoughts and for a moment silence ruled the time while i forgot i actually read it from start to end in each stanzas A to B to C and their coherence so well established in a matured poetic hand...Superb write i must say here.. (Report) Reply

  • (10/2/2011 2:41:00 AM)


    Great sense of regret apathy and lost....But why do you write the themes? ...Let it be vague to the readers (Report) Reply

  • (9/30/2011 11:44:00 PM)


    This is a magnificent poem, with a deep meaning, Very well written! An amazing poem from an amazing poet :) (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (9/26/2011 10:10:00 PM)


    A good writing to guide the life in a positive way to reach a happiest end. Nice blending of Autumn put the nature within. Thank you. Write more...
    Regards,
    pranab
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  • Hans Vr (9/26/2011 8:08:00 AM)


    I think this poem's images are very well chosen
    the seeds, the leaves, the colours
    Very meaningful
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  • Raj Arumugam (9/25/2011 2:25:00 PM)


    beautiful lines and extensive imagery on a universal topic, Unwritten Soul... (Report) Reply

  • (9/25/2011 6:23:00 AM)


    i love the way you have put the feeling from you heart into soft sweet words keep this up are are really good (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2011 1:46:00 AM)


    The description in the end helped understanding the poem...its good you did that. Of all the four season i believe autumn is very unique and so magical..i'm glad you wrote something like this with the flavour of autumn.....Good one unwritten soul...but it could have sound more better than this. (Report) Reply

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (9/22/2011 5:28:00 PM)


    I LIKE THE COLORS YOU USED IN THIS POEM I IMAGINE THEM
    YOU ARE RIGHT
    THE COLORS OF LEAVES SYMBOLIZE MANY THINGS AND IT IS GOOD THAT YOU CAPTURED IT HERE
    SEEMS LIKE YOU ARE A GOOD OBSERVANT AND A HOPEFUL PERSON
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