Awa Odori Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

good composition, pretty interesting.

this a good poem friends

nice, festivity. at festivals, we share rare camradrie, and overcome our differences. Mamta

You have painted in this poem a lovely picture of a delightfully inviting place! Thanks for sharing! *10*! Friend Thad

Though this entire poem consists of only twenty-five words, they are quite well-chosen and very effective one, Amhad. Your brief poem told it's tale wonderfully well, and depicted this Japanese festival quite beautifully. Carl.

Nice poem! Sounds interesting! I wish I could visit Japan someday

this poem wakes up in the readers mind a sense of excitement, bringing the sounds of a festival almost audibly to our ears. well done!

Fine thoughts penned beautifully! ......10+++

a happy one, good, we need that from time to time....

I enjoyed the world of excitement potrayed there in Awa Odori.