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When I am on Polo Ground
Many a poem I have found
Friend Krishana there I meet
Him with a new query I greet.
Today, on my morning walk
I had with him a hearty talk
I put him two questions straight
Cows eat grass & man meat ate?
In turn on his face was a smile
He said, ‘it is all a past profile'
In ‘Karmic' cycle he revealed
Seeds of the next birth sealed.
Cows were ‘Gopis' in the past
In devotion they were ever cast
Of my pure love they had vibe
So, charity & kindness imbibed.
Man was a ferocious beast
On animal's meat did feast
Tooth & nail stained in blood
So, his brain has violence stud.
Now he is the cleverest beast
From a distance on blood feasts
Satan's friendship harbored Hell
Around the world is terror spell.
Like Yaduvanshis he is cursed
His own race he will traverse
Means of destruction he found
In a nuclear supersonic sound.
O man, still there is time, awake! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Give up ego and the nuclear stake
This is Krishan's last peace plan
Of self-annihilation save the clan.
C. P. Sharma
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Friday, February 27, 2009 |
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Monday, April 20, 2009 |
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Comments about this poem (Awake, O Man, Awake
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C. P. Sharma
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (4/3/2010 1:52:00 PM)
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Yeah Lord Krishna [LK] terminated whole Yadu-Bansha when they’re in the high ebbs of ‘Falls’…
Ego is powerful to annihilate more effectively than N. BOMB and we’re carrying in our bosom this N-Bomb to pave the path of quick annihilation…and the sign signaling Peace is Weeping
10++
Ms. Nivedita
UK
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Meggie Gultiano (10/16/2009 8:53:00 PM)
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your words are so beautiful..it lingers here in my mind and heart.I love this
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Brishti Mazumdar (6/9/2009 10:14:00 AM)
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This is Krishan’s last peace plan
Of self-annihilation save the clan.
You write in such a manner and with such a conviction that these words become very inspiring...10+....Brishti
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Saadat Tahir (5/22/2009 7:16:00 AM)
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strong mythical and religious overtones....well written poetry
good flow and nice diction
cheers
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Roshni D'Souza (5/17/2009 8:50:00 AM)
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Enjoyed this one...really good flow and a great message! Thanks, roshni.
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rago rago (5/14/2009 9:48:00 AM)
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awake, o man awake........really a maser piece of write......man yet not eat his fellow being......even though some where it was happening...........we should awake for a new seed of world.....otherwise destruction is always invite us with joy........
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Vidyadhar-2 ..... (4/25/2009 1:47:00 AM)
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O man, still there is time, awake! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
He has been as sleep since his creation....Hope he will rise this time good poem
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Rani Turton (3/3/2009 2:45:00 AM)
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A very profound message embedded in this poem, as always, wisdom, facts and mythology interwined beautifully.
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Deependra Kumar Jha (3/2/2009 8:09:00 AM)
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Great write! a thought provoking one! I always admire the social, moral & spiritual values embedded in your poems. once again you have excelled.
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Vaibhav Pandey (3/2/2009 7:23:00 AM)
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sir, a great write once again from you.... a poem which should be read by everyone.
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