Awakening Poem by Hnt var

Awakening

Rating: 5.0


The morning glance I stood before
Clouds that made music you would not abhor

One and all, a universe of mind.
Gentle heavens and feeling no more.
To be brought here - oh you poor soul.

Define the one and have the second
As if it were my choice to be with you.

For no more is the hu-man chained to body.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ralph The Elf 28 November 2012

deep, this is deeper than poetry i wish i had your email because i think i want to talk to you more on this subject...brilliant write

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Dr.subhendu Kar 20 September 2012

dawn awakens soul to rejoice heaven seems to dissipates gloss, beautiful write making reader to feel joy,10+++, thanks for sharing

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