Awakingness Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Awakingness

Rating: 3.8


I cannot stay away
From sunny afternoons,
Passing weather-less days
In suffocating rooms...

There is more company
In the solace of God
Myself beside myself
Caressed by grass unshod...

Unhappy banishment!
Lurid society
An imposition bent
Of stiff variety...

The soul needs affection
From a credible source
Not a mere distraction,
But a redemptive course...

(Dedicated to my dear friend PenPen)

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doc Penpen B Takipsilim 26 March 2010

words are powerful it can build it can destroy deepest kindness out in the air definitely this poem- 10+++++ made 'someone' felt his presence shall help pass the barriers of time -it is my honor my pride to have 'a friend' no need for superlatives to describe a person who shall be more concerned for other people but to call him simply 'my friend romeo'... -penpen

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Nimal Dunuhinga 26 March 2010

Great stuff and I too believe a soul needs affection! Be alert my friend.

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