Claudia Krizay

Rookie - 3 Points (1/28/1956 / Washington DC)

Aware - Poem by Claudia Krizay

Run, walk Do not hide-
Last night and late morning- Shades of oblivion-
Trees bow in rhythm with the wind outside
Before and after this world was born-
Too many years have passed and clouds have turned
Chartreuse in hue as if the sun will never rise again-
Not for you, never for me-
It is only a choice of words-
Freedom on the rise and dogged determination-
Lost souls convey hopelessness inundating
Confusion, apparition and lack of power-
Only the morning glories and evergreens-
I thought I owned the woodlands-
Too many tears wept for yesteryear-
Uprooting trees and building tenements of
Concrete, brick and stone adorned with
Crystalline accents and I never cared-
Only the deer and rabbits in the wild-
Run, do not hide-
The past is sordid and no one knows
Tomorrow may be doomsday and I shall
Lock every door that may lead to a
Different place in time- all that would remain would be
Stems and branches fallen- into a puddle of delusiveness-
It could harm you if you leave your thoughts inside
The creek crawling over rocks-
You and I – all that matters-
Disdain for humanity has set fire to my
Spirit- though on the run- seize it within a net, silver plated-
Nothing is real and only for the moment-
Music resonates from far away places and I hear
Thunder emanating from
Pink clouds of misfortune-
Walk and never run- the rules have been changed-
Your life belongs only to you-
Although you cannot stop the rain-
Final words have been spoken:
Slowly walk and follow your lead-
Sing and dance as much as you can, as nothing lasts forever-
You cannot turn back time- I hear a voice of the not so distant past-
Hold onto your dreams for an eternity-
They may be all that you have-


Comments about Aware by Claudia Krizay

  • Rookie - 51 Points Neetha Sasidharan (1/22/2012 8:12:00 AM)

    grt poem.......kp penning........
    nice rhythm.......real thoughts.........wow! ! ! ! ! ! !
    could u find out d lady i mentioned in my poem ((((b'day))) ? ? (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 177 Points Vipins Puthooran (9/30/2011 5:04:00 AM)

    Magnificient write, , , , (pink clouds of misfortune) wow amazing...
    Excellent and a great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/30/2011 5:58:00 PM)

    Nice imageries..very poignant write...full of substance and flow (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 7, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 22, 2011


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