(b) 19 (Pain/Longing) Let Me Enter Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(b) 19 (Pain/Longing) Let Me Enter



Will you let me enter the maze of your mind?
The complex thoughts not letting you unwind

Sweetheart, I know your soul loves mine
But something stops you from crossing the line

Didnt you say lets just go with the flow
Then why are you not letting the wind blow

Honey, Why are you afraid of letting me down?
What is it you are not telling me thats making you drown

Arent we all ephemeral and our lives transient?
Cant we enjoy all the moments that love has sent

Time will wear me and you and everything away
But our love can last forever, if you let it stay

I am torn by your unpredictable ways
But the anguish disappears with your gaze

Your absence makes my heart writhe in pain
Your silence makes it bleed as if its been slain

You are in my breath, in my bloodstream
But if I am not in yours, I would rather let go off the steam

I dont want you in fits and starts
I want ALL otherwise I must depart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 21 March 2007

Life should be lived and not be Frightened of the way we feel...

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