(b) 4 (Pain/Longing) Wish You Had Let Me Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(b) 4 (Pain/Longing) Wish You Had Let Me

Rating: 4.1


Wish you had let me reach out...
Touch your lips and touch your soul
Help you wipe out all your doubts
By the sheer fire of love making us aglow

Wish you had let me reach out...
Help you come out of your prison
Of self imposed pain, grief and drought
To a fountain of love and to be arisen

Wish you had let me reach out...
To surrender and turn our hearts into a temple
Where a spring of love sprouts
Anointing us and making us fulfilled

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 December 2006

Very passionate expression, young lady...as if i expected anything less... FJR

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Patricia Gale 04 December 2006

Beautiful, to reach out... if only they would see.... lovely

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Brittany Hill 04 December 2006

I love the poem and the way you put the words. Great Job

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Brian Dorn 04 December 2006

Wonderful thoughts and poetically fulfilling. Well done, TO! Brian

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