Baby I Love You 10 + + Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Baby I Love You 10 + +



Baby I love you 10 + +
I love you like the earth loves grass

Baby I love you very much
Keep my life warm with your sweet touch

Baby I love you more than dad
Loving you makes me more than glad

Baby I love you more than mom
You are my water of Zamzam

Baby I love you less than God
But you are my home and abroad

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Zamzam is the name of the well that provides the water to billions of people, have thirstily drunk from throughout history, especially during the Hajj pilgrimage. Zamzam is linked to some of the most important personalities in world history: the Prophets Ibrahim and Ismail (peace be upon them) and Muhammad (peace and blessings be upon him and his family) , as well as Ismail's mother Hajira (may Allah be pleased with her) . Its water is the holiest water to the Muslims.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
So Close 21 November 2012

yeah excellent one again.....and the lines Baby I love you more than mom You are my water of Zamzam Baby I love you less than God But you are my home and abroad is superb! ! »so close«

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Dilstefny Dd 21 November 2012

Woh good.I loved it very much

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 21 November 2012

so great and beautiful written. i love all the parts of this work so fresh and wise.

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Unwritten Soul 21 November 2012

Great rhythm, nice meaning and well written..everyone knows u can write well Asif, keep it going_SOul

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Sallam Yassin 21 November 2012

it is a piece of love with deep bounded in heart well done

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Wahab Abdul 24 November 2012

i love it.....good flow and good words...love it...again

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Hazel Durham 23 November 2012

Great write with lovely flow and thythm and very interesting notes on the ZamZam! !

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 22 November 2012

A deeply pround expression of love 10++- I love the rhymning couplets.

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Yash Shinde 22 November 2012

the last couplet is my favorite, it is smewhat to me comical and irony, great job :)

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Sheikh Ahmed Tijan Bah 22 November 2012

last couplet was the best

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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