Cambridge Keenan

Rookie - 38 Points (Ontario, Canada)

Baby I'M Amazed By You - Poem by Cambridge Keenan

In the online world of virtual existence
Is another demension,
A Twighlight Zone if you will...
Expierences repeating themselves,
It's all over the news everynight,
Another shot gun shooting,
Another passionate murder,
Creeps crawling through the web like spiders,
Weaving their web with silken, pretty lies.
Lies of wonder, Lies of caring,
Lies of Love.
But you weren't like that were you? ?
You were not as a scammer surley? ?
Not You! ! No! ...Your one of the good guys...
One of a special few...an honest man
Revering the very Lord of the Universe!
A gentleman of honorable words and actions.
How long were you planning this plot?
Oh let me guess...you had a dry spot in your writing and needed a patsy
To act the role of character in your newest novel.
So that's where I fit in is it?
Wow....congratulations...
You got more than you barganed for..
Stealing my heart and shattering it into tiny pieces
You who knew better....
You a big shot writer...
You are unbelievable
You
BABY YOU AMAZE ME,
EVERY LITTLE THING THAT YOU DO.......
I am still in love with you! !
And crawling out of the DOME! !

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I'm Amazed.............? ? ! !


...................................... Cambridge Keenan

Comments about Baby I'M Amazed By You by Cambridge Keenan

  • Gold Star - 8,236 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/13/2013 10:23:00 PM)

    After all these, the last two lines have amazed me too! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 12, 2013


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