Baby, You Could Draw Hearts On My Life With Your Paintbrush Words (Prose) Poem by J Knight

Baby, You Could Draw Hearts On My Life With Your Paintbrush Words (Prose)



Baby, you could draw hearts on my life with your paintbrush words, and you could light minds, and I don’t have to be dead/ my life of blue/ “You can’t forget this sky kiss” (I want you to paint hearts of life) / you’re the wind/ “You girl are sunshine- oxygen- life, and heaven could watch us and be jealous and dead/ I’m into you, and you could be life hearts and star beauty and a muse/ Still longing for those words/ “You’re the gold night... shout beauty stars to light silver hearts that could be pure/ “you, gold... colorful... I’ll crawl on stars to watch you shine... to watch you glisten- from your black twisting purple velvet dream that is your life baby”/ beautiful sky- I’m sad but you could say: “you’re my summer heart... stay light heaven”/ deep into my grave/ “you’re to be sky that becomes hearts and all Your beauty creating tears of sad blue sea/ I’m into you, blue/ shine eyes under the mirror of the water and I can see your image projected in the sky/ “So you’re drawing gold paradise”/ a heart dying above black colorful hearts/ “down mad summer graves- I don’t need oxygen. I’m looking for you to take the world”/ glowing you/ “ancient experience of beautiful light”/ from sky to sky, the rains mind/ stars alive floating like a lily on the blue sea/ strawberries with some juicy shade- your beauty projects the sky so I can breathe. Make me breathe girl and move your words as a paintbrush and make neon forget your dreams”/ be rains of life and grow paradise. You’re colorful/ Your creating sad deep blue seas madly as I get through You and I’m under sky... understand you need to shine baby/ “you’re stars girl”/ soothe me and be my grave- be pure hearts with me and we‘ll see in a while, light/ breathe the shine of our future/ “Baby, you could light silver hearts with your dreams”/ be my grave/ “you’re my life and a source of gold summer-light/ you’re stars... you could light minds and you can take the world/ down mad summer heart... shout beauty that projects the gold- I can see it shine... you can paint hearts in the sky... I understand you could light our future/ I love you silver heart, but I’m sad- but you can kiss me and I’ll crawl all over my grave and be alive/ Baby, you glisten in my dreams... rain light on me... star, you shine colorful... I can see/ you could paint hearts with words/“I love you... I can’t help it... I got heart”/

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subroto Chatterjee 02 August 2009

Take heart, sport. You'll have the passion of a Picasso and the artistry of Goya, with the zaniness of Dali, mixed with the sedateness of Constable. May be a dash of Van Gogh as well. You're just nineteen. You may paint with a brush or whisper with words....but live like a painter and act like an artist. And you're just beginning to..... Take it easy in the meantime. And share some of your lyrics with Bob Dylan (see if he can sing some of these) , or make a trip to Hollywood. Hope floats.. Yeah. Cheers. Subroto

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J Knight

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Watertown, N.Y.
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