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Rating: 5.0


Cast upon the the soaken shore
Damned to be there evermore
Lost forever at one word
Of a man whom less preferred
In drunked blur, the sight of me
So I was tithed to the sea
Pruned ruined and lost for good
Barred to sands and palmy wood
The freedom limited by cresting waves
To make me more a solitare slave

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Wheeler 08 May 2008

I love the first line. It draws you in. beautiful to say the least, wonderful at that. it is such an awesome tell that i feel like i'm truly there.(ps. it was so pimp, i gave it a 10 and faved it.)

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Michael Campbell 08 May 2008

this is excellent. sad, rejected, lost.. i love it. thank you for sharing.

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