Jim O'Donnell

Rookie (That old my birth certs is expired / Glasgow)

Baldness - Poem by Jim O'Donnell

Baldness comes to men like me
And I am only twenty three
Few strands of hair upon my head
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Comments about Baldness by Jim O'Donnell

  • Veteran Poet - 1,359 Points C. P. Sharma (3/2/2010 5:42:00 AM)

    I appreciate your poetic skill and the sense of humour. It was joy gliding through your poem.
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  • Rookie Pamela Lutwyche (2/16/2010 7:13:00 PM)

    I can’t sleep so I’m here and it’s 1 o’clock in the morning I’m just passing time I liked your poem Jim.
    It really is quite fine. I’m imagining you in the shower shampooing from head to toe. Sorry Jim I’m getting tired now, so I’ll say good night and go. Very good poem 10 from me (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Marie Shine (5/3/2009 6:40:00 AM)

    A VERY funny write Jim.
    A cute poem on a problem that seems to affect young men these days barely out of their teenage years, and informing those concerned about the many advantages of being bald.
    Very well written and a 10 from me. (Report) Reply








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