(brief renderings) Joe Fazio

Banquet Of Love - Poem by (brief renderings) Joe Fazio

I once heard these words in a song;
'You must remember this...a kiss is
just a kiss...a sigh is just a sigh, ' etc.
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Comments about Banquet Of Love by (brief renderings) Joe Fazio

  • Gold Star - 43,996 Points Akhtar Jawad (10/25/2014 11:37:00 AM)

    A nice poem on kiss................ (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 30,227 Points * Sunprincess * (6/20/2014 7:39:00 PM)

    .........beautiful poem....yet I must agree with Joe.....three Kiss graffitis are to much....maybe just do one at the end.....and it will have more impact...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ellie Bristoe (10/20/2012 4:06:00 AM)

    Right i like it but miss out the kiss kiss ect (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joe Jones (8/12/2012 6:39:00 PM)

    You destroyed the first half of a brilliant poem with all the childish kiss crap at the end. The first half was visual magic, then it was like some child sabotaged your poem with an attempt at shaped verse that comes across (in this poem) as more like graffiti. And as if one graffiti kiss wasn’t enough to wreck the amazing beginning of the poem, you delivered three. Up to this line “Your kiss...touch...embrace, has captured my heart...my very soul.” The poem is a masterpiece, after that it delves past amateur into complete silly teen-type fluff and loses all its substance. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gbadamosi Daniel (11/10/2011 9:56:00 PM)

    I love this. Its simply outstanding. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maya (ayam) Armstrong (6/6/2010 6:26:00 AM)

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kayy Vida (6/1/2010 10:42:00 AM)

    You must really love her. I hope you have a great life and add me on facebook if you have one :) I am listed on facebook as: Kayla Terese Mangelo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tracy Galvez (5/12/2010 7:39:00 PM)

    omg.. that's something... you must love her! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kitty Vans (4/7/2010 10:39:00 AM)

    I FREAKING LOVE THAT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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