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(brief renderings) Joe Fazio


Banquet Of Love


I once heard these words in a song;
'You must remember this...a kiss is
just a kiss...a sigh is just a sigh, ' etc.
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  • * Sunprincess * (6/20/2014 7:39:00 PM)

    .........beautiful poem....yet I must agree with Joe.....three Kiss graffitis are to much....maybe just do one at the end.....and it will have more impact...... (Report) Reply

  • Joe Jones (8/12/2012 6:39:00 PM)

    You destroyed the first half of a brilliant poem with all the childish kiss crap at the end. The first half was visual magic, then it was like some child sabotaged your poem with an attempt at shaped verse that comes across (in this poem) as more like graffiti. And as if one graffiti kiss wasn’t enough to wreck the amazing beginning of the poem, you delivered three. Up to this line “Your kiss...touch...embrace, has captured my heart...my very soul.” The poem is a masterpiece, after that it delves past amateur into complete silly teen-type fluff and loses all its substance. (Report) Reply

  • Kayy Vida (6/1/2010 10:42:00 AM)

    You must really love her. I hope you have a great life and add me on facebook if you have one :) I am listed on facebook as: Kayla Terese Mangelo (Report) Reply

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