(brief renderings) Joe Fazio

Right i like it but miss out the kiss kiss ect

You destroyed the first half of a brilliant poem with all the childish kiss crap at the end. The first half was visual magic, then it was like some child sabotaged your poem with an attempt at shaped verse that comes across (in this poem) as more like graffiti. And as if one graffiti kiss wasn’t enough to wreck the amazing beginning of the poem, you delivered three. Up to this line “Your kiss...touch...embrace, has captured my heart...my very soul.” The poem is a masterpiece, after that it delves past amateur into complete silly teen-type fluff and loses all its substance.

I love this. Its simply outstanding. Keep it up.

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