*barren Walls Of Sorrow Poem by Bonnie Collins
*barren Walls Of Sorrow
Tides came and washed away
the empitiness inside my vacant
heart, the waves came with a thrash
and washed all the remains only leaving
a lonley piece of driftwood, withered
and set alone to endure its helpless
future for someone's raging fire
Listening to the gulls, screeching in
harmony of knowing the tides were
very high with huge changes in store,
I walked along the beach that fatefull
day and wondered, which way to follow
As night set in, calmly now, the sea
once again was thrashing to and fro
and leaving behind the tity bed of
new sand with the moon casting its
lonely shadow, it told me then, the
sand is new, and now is the time
for a new start in my life leaving behind
the battered hinges on the door to my
forsaken heart, but letting the oppourtunity
to replace its barren walls of sorrow......
Another emotive piece of work Bonnie that conjures up so many wonderful images. Love, Andrew xx
Bonnie, the sea speaks volumes in this powerful poem. It is all there, the thrashing waves, the driftwood, gulls and the moon pulling me into your story. The imagery of the door concluded an excellent poem. 10 Karin Anderson
emotions filled this milady. i read it with an aching heart. it is well written milady.
Beautiful Imagery... every word is perfect. Lovely poem Bonnie.. very emotional and deep
Very impressive Bonnie, if i post my favorite parts i would have to retype the whole poem lol. Thank you for sharing my friend. As always, its a pleasure. :)
Excellent piece very well written as always. This piece was sad with a beautifully haunting message.
Beautiful vivid poem Bonnie...the images jump off the page at me...10++++
Moving imagery you bring in there, Bonnie...new sand and the lonely moon and the message you receive...and the barren walls you leave...excellent piece...10
'now is the time for a new start in my life leaving behind the battered hinges on the door to my forsaken heart, but letting the opportunity to replace its barren walls of sorrow...... ' very moving touching poem indeed..in fact this is the time for a new start in my life too, but it is said than done thought....to get that kick start, when the past is full of wounds... nice inspirational write ma'am... regards shan
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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'and now is the time for a new start in my life leaving behind the battered hinges on the door to my forsaken heart, but letting the oppourtunity to replace its barin walls of sorrow...... 'this is a very nice piece..i qoute this stanza coz for me its the highlightfor this poem...never be dismayed for there is always a sun after darkness...there is always a rainbow after the rain...and tears will be replaced with laughters...let time heals the wounds..make your life as pretty as the colors..make all the senses active and don't make your heart as hard as the stone..accept GOD'S will for HE knows everything...this is also what i did... naizz