Bathe Me Poem by Giselle Joseph

Bathe Me

Rating: 5.0


Standing in the light
a nude of caramel
a perfect portrait
admired
slenderly poised
exposing
expressing
\waiting.

Dive into the ocean
deep
explore gems of beauty
feel the warmth
see the pearl
glowing
out of breath
resurface
exhale in joy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

subterfuge of sexuality. good work.

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~ Jon London ~ 30 June 2009

Beautiful imagery that you can almost touch, the tender voiced lines express a depth of passionate colours that flood the heart...this is beautiful through-out 10++

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Eyan Desir 30 June 2009

Good flow sweet write

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