Bathing In Warm Water... Poem by abhilash fraizer

Bathing In Warm Water...

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Bathing in warm water
Rekindles in me
All the warmth of my childhood!
Even today, on this cold rainy day,
As the warm water slithered through my limbs
A rapture transported me
Back to my olden days,
Steamed with my father’s love,
For it was he who bathed me
When I was a kid.
What feeling, what delight,
And what forgetfulness I felt
When the warmth enveloped
My painful nakedness,
My loneliness!
Even now, when the chill of life’s agonies
And painful isolation
Make me shiver,
I go back to my bath
For an ablution
In the warmth of water,
Nay, in the warmth of love!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 13 February 2010

And what forgetfulness I felt When the warmth enveloped My painful nakedness, My loneliness! Almost carried away in mind of the reader.Fabulous and fantastic.10/10

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Bathing is so successful in getting rid of negative energy. What beautiful memories you have of your childhood your Father bathing you. I loved your poem! 10 Karin Anderson

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Kesav Easwaran 26 May 2009

Nostalgic reflections well presented...paternal affection has no parrellels...good work...10

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