BEAU GOLDEN

Rookie (1565 / Earth, USA, California, Los Angeles, Van Nuys, Balboa blvd)

Battle to the Death over Groceries and Toys


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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (7/14/2008 1:25:00 PM)

    Yeah! I tend to agree that thisis not an easy thing to read, nor is it quite easy to understand. I suppose I know what you are saying, but I am not sure. More
    clarity is definitely needed.

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  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (7/1/2006 2:32:00 AM)

    Beau, I agree with Tai about the splendid title. Also the content is very strong. I would find the poem easier to read if you broke it up into stanzas, but you communicate your message loud and clear. Warmly, Alison (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ***** ********* (6/30/2006 8:10:00 PM)

    I like this Beau. Needs a slight edit, The 'i's are with you! I or 'i' Captain! lol That's a Joke by the way. Grinning at you, loving the title so so much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (6/24/2006 1:30:00 PM)

    Very powerful and profound. You felt this one to your very soul.

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  • Rookie - 122 Points Theorem Thetruthserum (6/24/2006 4:32:00 AM)

    Wow that is a cool poem...I couldn't agree more. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Patricia Gale (6/21/2006 6:51:00 PM)

    Love the title. Splendid read

    Patricia (Report) Reply

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