Be Editor Of My Love ♥ ♥ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Be Editor Of My Love ♥ ♥

Rating: 5.0


I am naïve
I write poetry with my heart
People read it with their brains

The essence of words
does not convey my messages
my love is lost in the air.

I feel so helpless
yet my passion endeavor
to reach your heart

Someday cacophony will turn
the melancholy cord to
the song of rave

Love, you come to my rescue
In the midst of this fancy
with your editing skills

I know, Heart dance on your tunes, O love
My mind gets filled with joy, O Love
And body makes the aura with you, O Love.

Thursday, November 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 03 November 2016

this poem of yours..people don't read with their brains but with their hearts they read because it carries love with it...congrats Asim- -10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 November 2016

My heart sings and dances with this lovely poem! Love is the elixir of life that rescues and rejuvenates all! Asim Nehal ji - Really happy to give a full Vote 10+++

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M Asim Nehal 03 November 2016

Thank u so much Geeta ji....appreciate your encouragement.

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Nosheen Irfan 03 November 2016

Beautiful write. That's the voice of every poet. Love is essential. A big 10

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Shreya Hacks 09 September 2020

Excellent poem. Yes poets are whimsical////

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Darren Jkoeryo 01 June 2020

Visited once again. Wonderful poem.

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T Rajan Evol 04 November 2016

I think no one reached to that level to become Editor of Love....10

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Darren Jkoeryo 03 November 2016

Love, you come to my rescue In the midst of this fancy with your editing skills

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 November 2016

To reach your heart! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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