Walterrean Salley

Gold Star - 5,215 Points (Savannah, Ga)

Be Free - Poem by Walterrean Salley

As a loose garment,
Let not the soul be bound to
Any worldly goods.

(A Senryu)

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  • Gold Star - 5,215 Points Walterrean Salley (9/9/2015 8:59:00 AM)

    Thank you, Fabrizio, for your time, and keen observation. And critique. Would you please send me, or post here, the instructions for writing a classic senryu, just like you did when posting your comments for the “haiku: Mown Grass. And I shalll try to work it to perfection. With appreciation. -ws (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 69,625 Points Fabrizio Frosini (9/1/2015 3:39:00 AM)

    why you call it ''senryu''? your composition hasn't got the features of a classic senryu, Salley (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 11, 2011

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