Lisa Rhodes

Rookie - 48 Points (Born 1962 / Manhattan, New York City)

Be Gentle When You Touch Me - Poem by Lisa Rhodes

I have conquered you and made you mine.
You have come forward and told me that you want me;
You have succumbed to your egocentric masculine need to lie
In bed with me, no fears, no strings, no tears
Running down my legs.
Everything depends on your ecstasy:
The feelings that you have devoured in me.
I am jealous? You’re making love to me
With passion that was set in you by me?
Can it be love made you especially for me?
For eternity?
From now on, I’m the holder of all the keys
To your virginity,
Pent up inside of me.
Now set me free;
Release your love to only me
But oh so gently, gently
Make love to me.


Comments about Be Gentle When You Touch Me by Lisa Rhodes

  • Gold Star - 8,904 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/21/2013 1:00:00 PM)

    Well written. Desire and passion well expressed. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Scott Austin (2/16/2009 11:57:00 PM)

    Feel the heat and passion in this piece you have written. Thank you for sahring it with us.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 16, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, February 16, 2009


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