Treasure Island

TheSilent Loudness


Be My Present


Be my awful days
Turned into unforgettable nights
Be my countless ways
To be shot down when I tell myself I'm awful

Be my forgiveness
When I make a mistake
Be my silence
When words can't capture the moment

Be my 'I missed you'
After my not so long ago
Be my break up talk
When my heart's been broken up

Be my 'Be careful'
When we both know I'll get hurt
Be my listener
When I care and want you okay

Be my 'I'm sorry'
When I can't speak
Be my 'Come on now...'
When it takes too long

But most of all be my almost
Because you
are the future
and this
was perfect

Submitted: Tuesday, July 15, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, July 15, 2014

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Leaving is hard
You'll only know once you have something to lose,
so it must be personal
and it must be someone special to you

To quote Thomas-
'Man, be my metaphor'

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