Lawrence CH Hiun


Be My Valentine


You can be my Valentine,
You're beautiful,
Like a rose.

My love,
Love me today,
Love me tomorrow.

My Love,
Please listen,
I always love you.

My Love, I say,
I miss you always,
More than ever.

Be with me now,
To touch my heart,
To knit my souls with yours.

You will be always
My Valentine, and
My Love.

Happy Valentine to You.
Lot of Love,
My Love,

My Valentine,
Be My Valentine.

Submitted: Monday, January 09, 2012
Edited: Monday, January 09, 2012

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  • Rookie - 4 Points Lawrence H (1/13/2012 9:24:00 AM)

    Dave,
    Thanks for your kind words and encouragement..
    In a poem, we say little or use less words but those words means a lot...Therefore, it is very difficult to compose a simple and direct good poem with very little words (maybe in a santza or one line we only we use 4 to 8 syllables. Each paragraph, I use only either 3 or 4 lines with a good line break between paragraphs for reading, with right punctuations and pauses in-between. (silence plays an important roles when come to reading poem aloud.)

    The whole poem may consists of 4 or 5 paragraphs (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,639 Points Dave Walker (1/13/2012 8:19:00 AM)

    I really like this, a really great poem, i see what you
    Mean about our styles. A great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Lawrence H (1/11/2012 10:27:00 PM)

    Reflection note:

    This poem is dedicated to all my friends and my love ones on this year Valentine on 14 Feb. and remember that love is beautiful if ones want to live their life more meaningful.
    Love is an universal language just like music and poem. (Report) Reply

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