Be Somebody Poem by Crazy Vampire

Be Somebody

Rating: 5.0


do good in school thats what i've been told
am i strong enough to follow my goals, am i bold?
be someone not trash
enjoy school too because it goes by in a flash

those are the words i have heard so many times
dont be stupid dont do a crime
it all adds to the stress
they say to bring them joy, bring success

my family tells me not to let them down
it is hard when your color is brown
but i shall try my best until i succeed
if i try hard enough, in life i shall exceed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robin Machorro 27 July 2010

wow i loved this poems! its so hard living up to your parents needs and everything

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Monica Arlene 17 May 2010

In this poem, the glass is half full :)

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Michael Brock 19 April 2010

Very good, intense with good imagery and flow. Good Poem, I like that you take the positive side and push to succeed. I think you did succeed in this poem very well. thanks for sharing it Michael

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Cody Averesch 29 March 2010

that is o so very true

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Iron Panda 23™ 25 March 2010

\^-^/ i love it! !

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Crazy Vampire

Crazy Vampire

Hemet, California
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