Beach Poem by Athena Goddess of Wisdom Lumis Light to all

Beach

Rating: 5.0


The waves come in and go out.
Standing at the edge of the beach
I can imagine the peace that is around me.
Standing on the edge of the beach
I place my feet in to the water
And I listen to the waves.
As they come and go.

The waves come in and go out.
Standing on the edge of the beach
I watch as the sun goes down,
Saying good-night to me
And the moon comes out
Saying hello.
And the waves still come and go.

The waves come in and go out.
And there is a peace like never before.
A gentle and loving peace
That surrounds me
Incloseing me,
In its gentle arms.

The waves come in and go out.
I stand at the edge listening
And I hear them calling
“Come in” they seem to say
And so I must
Otherwise the creatures of the sea
Will come and carry me away.

The waves come in and go out.
They call my name.
The creatures gather
When they hear my name.
I am a creature of the sea,
And of the water.

The waves come in and go out.
They call out my name.
The creatures gather
Chanting my name
Waiting for me to come
And help them.
For I am their queen
They say.

The waves come in and go out;
Drawing me to the water.
All the creatures of the sea come to me.
I am their protector,
And queen.
I am a creature of the sea,
And of the water.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Austin Wheeler 23 December 2009

You have your weaponry handled nicely and hit all the pressure points if you know what I mean. Something beautiful is definitely going on inside you. And I live basically on the beach so I especially liked this particular poem.

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Eyan Desir 15 December 2009

Well express... again good job...

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