Beach (A Tanka) Poem by asma bahrainwala

Beach (A Tanka)

Rating: 5.0


Pebbles on the beach
Pierce through our heels as we walk
A mild price to pay
For the damage we subject
It to by littering waste.






18th October 2006
7.14 pm

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 18 October 2006

This is like a flash realisation. Really liked it Asma. Preets

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Shivapriya Surve 19 November 2006

Wow! That's so original and earnest! What a thought Asma!

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niggaboy 14 January 2018

this poem is gay and very bad you people have no sense of taste

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 September 2008

A short and cute composition.10 with love.

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Melvina Germain 25 August 2007

A small poem with a huge meaning, we must clean up our act and protect our environment. Well said Asma, I love when poets show concern about our precious environment, Thankyou Asma.--Melvina--

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Peter A. Crowther 16 December 2006

Neatly encapsulates the truth that we will have to pay for the damage we inflict on our beautiful planet

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Onida 22 November 2006

A very right and real fact, all captured so beautifully! ! yours, Nida

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