footprints of sandpipers
were so transient
the sea a sandwiper
where it came and went
I remember this, and it's still a great read. Nice observation, Chuck, in your usual unusual style! Est : ]
Such a tiny poem, paints such a pretty picture. What a scene you conjure up in a mere 15 words! A point for each word would be appropriate, but guess I'll just have to settle for ten! Linda
I love the images created in this gem of a poem. The brevity of this piece echoes the ephemeral theme perfectly. Love it. Justine.
loved it. al. (but i seem to feel that way bout them all.)
In, bang & out. A power poem. Loved it. Ez
Time & Tide wait for no Man.....Great write, Chuck''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
Such a light, elegant little poem, Chuck. A beautiful image skillfully penned. love, Allie xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I had to read this slowly Charles otherwise it's a bit of a tongue twister. Ha! It is certainly an interesting write. Nice. I get your drift, it's a swell poem. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX