Beach Cleanup Poem by Chuck Audette

Beach Cleanup

Rating: 5.0


footprints of sandpipers
were so transient
the sea a sandwiper
where it came and went

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 23 September 2006

I had to read this slowly Charles otherwise it's a bit of a tongue twister. Ha! It is certainly an interesting write. Nice. I get your drift, it's a swell poem. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Esther Leclerc 23 September 2006

I remember this, and it's still a great read. Nice observation, Chuck, in your usual unusual style! Est : ]

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Linda Ori 23 September 2006

Such a tiny poem, paints such a pretty picture. What a scene you conjure up in a mere 15 words! A point for each word would be appropriate, but guess I'll just have to settle for ten! Linda

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R H 24 September 2006

I love the images created in this gem of a poem. The brevity of this piece echoes the ephemeral theme perfectly. Love it. Justine.

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alice sunderland 10 November 2006

loved it. al. (but i seem to feel that way bout them all.)

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In, bang & out. A power poem. Loved it. Ez

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 05 October 2006

Time & Tide wait for no Man.....Great write, Chuck''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Lea Simpson 04 October 2006

Beautiful. So damned beautiful.

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Alison Cassidy 29 September 2006

Such a light, elegant little poem, Chuck. A beautiful image skillfully penned. love, Allie xx

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

Poetry Hell, Vermont
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