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Beach Life....

I sat on the wall and just.
Watched
My mind and eyes danced to the fore
Shore
Waves of seas and souls who pranced
Jubilant
Was my expression

As impressionistic imprints imbedded in
Mind and sand and sea
Buckets of love and sand ebbed and flowed

Feathers flew, fled, fought for disregarded chips
And lay also
Lay as unwanted knickers on the tangerine sand

It was a knickerbocker glorious day
Of ice-cream cones and cream clad skin
Of towels, flip-flops
Bunny hops
Sandy hands and castles
Surrounded by murky, frothy, salted streams

For once the sky held little
Importance as
I was far to distracted by

Life

...............thank you for reading..........

Submitted: Saturday, October 27, 2012


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  • Heather Wilkins (9/29/2013 9:16:00 PM)

    written well with great imagery. life on the beach,

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  • Owain Glyn (4/13/2013 1:59:00 PM)

    This is a very lifelike description of a day at the seaside, seagulls stealing chips and children having a glorious time. I loved it.

  • Kevin Patrick (11/28/2012 11:05:00 PM)

    There's something wonderful about a beach, the rolling waves on a shore that sometimes seems like it goes on forever, this really transported me to where you were, and I could see everything with clarity, of course this work really comes together with that last line. A fantastic read

  • Shihabudheen K J (11/6/2012 8:40:00 AM)

    Felt like am watching a young woman or girl cheering with beach sand and waters.fabulous

  • Terry O'leary (11/4/2012 11:07:00 AM)

    Full of vim, vigor and life... splendid... Terry

  • Valsa George (11/3/2012 4:41:00 AM)

    The alliterative use of words create a rare symphony along with the music of waves beating against the sandy shores! !
    An enjoyable read! !

  • Ellias Anderson (11/1/2012 2:56:00 PM)

    Well, sea has it's own mystery. but sea is the symbole of the calm
    i love it beacuse of it's calm power
    good work

  • Smoky Hoss (10/31/2012 8:32:00 AM)

    thank you for writing... always enjoy your words!

  • Mark Dillon (10/28/2012 10:41:00 AM)

    lite, nice to just lose yourself on a day like this.

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (10/28/2012 12:39:00 AM)

    Buckets of love and sand ebbed and flowed
    nice line. enjoyed

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