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BEAUTIES NUCLEUS, GLORIA

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My darling,


If I was a painter
a master of repute,
A genius of deft strokes
to sketch the charcoal base.
One thousand years of learning
need I,
indeed,
to reproduce the beauty
that dwells within your soul,
and reflects upon your face.

Submitted: Wednesday, April 09, 2008
Edited: Tuesday, November 01, 2011


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  • Subroto Chatterjee (4/18/2009 1:40:00 AM)

    Ah yes,
    And Glory be her name! A beautiful tribute to one's life partner. What more could she ask for?

    Cheers.
    Subroto

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  • Muhammad Ali (3/31/2009 9:00:00 AM)

    Super tribute my friend
    More than beautiful poem expressing deep transparent love
    10

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  • Jessica Jemima (1/15/2009 2:11:00 AM)

    How lovely!
    Keep it up :)

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  • Fay Slimm (12/16/2008 1:32:00 AM)

    A beautiful tribute to a beautiful love Ken. - - wishing you all the happiness your verse sings about - forever....... and warm wishes to your Gloria who inspired it.... from Fay.

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  • Greenwolfe 1962 (9/1/2008 11:06:00 PM)

    So close, yet so far away. The length is perfect. The form and structure are fine.
    There is only one thing it needs so much to make it one of mine.
    The only thing to make it sound like music to our ears.
    Rhythm and rhyme the only things to which the mind adheres.

    GW62

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  • Tanya Stanford (8/29/2008 3:30:00 AM)

    That is such a beautiful tribute to your wife. Well done.

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  • James B. Earley (4/29/2008 8:01:00 AM)

    You are an artist my friend, for you have painted an exciting image of passionate devotion!

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  • Amie-Lee ...... (4/15/2008 7:37:00 PM)

    This is a really good poem, great description of your wife's beauty

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