(8/20/91 / Middletown New York)

What do you think this poem is about?

Beautiful

i look through the window and see in the skies
the beautiful blueness of your beautiful eyes

i look at the bark of a tree and the brown i see there
is the beautiful browness of your beautiful hair

i look at the ocean as the wave rips
and i see beautiful roundness to your beautiful hips

i listen to the radio and with every station choice
i hear the beautiful sharpness of your beautiful voice

i listen to the breeze and the storm in the sky
i hear the cowardice shake in my cowerdice sigh

because though you look beautiful nd sound beautiful too
i could never be brave enough to ask that question to you

Submitted: Thursday, July 10, 2008


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  • Rabecca Welch (1/29/2009 1:40:00 PM)

    this is great! it kind of made me teary eyed.

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  • Star Dust (10/3/2008 12:55:00 PM)

    aaaaaaaaaaw totally great poem! ! !
    new to the site and need to write one but liking what you`ve done! ! !
    keep it up! :)

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  • Amy Parkinson (8/3/2008 7:29:00 AM)

    Hey, i really liked this poem... i thought it was very good! Keep writin! :)

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  • Eileen J. Hudson (7/28/2008 11:28:00 AM)

    The name is exactly what this poem is, Beautiful. You can feel the beauty in every word and letter. Steven, you did a wonderful and spectacular poem-I really mean what I say. Thank you for sharing it.

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  • Laurel Fasching (7/20/2008 2:25:00 AM)

    touching...
    and speaking of beautiful that is exactly what this was.
    thanks.
    ;)

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