Treasure Island

Steven Brewer

(8/20/91 / Middletown New York)

Beautiful


i look through the window and see in the skies
the beautiful blueness of your beautiful eyes

i look at the bark of a tree and the brown i see there
is the beautiful browness of your beautiful hair

i look at the ocean as the wave rips
and i see beautiful roundness to your beautiful hips

i listen to the radio and with every station choice
i hear the beautiful sharpness of your beautiful voice

i listen to the breeze and the storm in the sky
i hear the cowardice shake in my cowerdice sigh

because though you look beautiful nd sound beautiful too
i could never be brave enough to ask that question to you

Submitted: Thursday, July 10, 2008

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  • Sam Singer (6/4/2013 5:01:00 PM)

    i look through the window and see in the skies
    the beautiful blueness of your beautiful eyes

    i look at a stallion as black as night, its mane blown back what a heavenly sight. what i see there
    is nothing to compare, to the beautiful blackness of your beautiful hair

    i look at the ocean as the wave rips,
    and i see beautiful roundness of your beautiful lips,

    i listen to the radio and with every station choice,
    i hear the beautiful sharpness of your beautiful voice,

    i listen to the breeze and the storm in the sky,
    i feel the droplits on my skin as it passes me by,

    though you look beautiful and sound beautiful too,
    i could never have been luckier then the day i met you. (Report) Reply

  • Star Dust (10/3/2008 12:55:00 PM)

    aaaaaaaaaaw totally great poem! ! !
    new to the site and need to write one but liking what you`ve done! ! !
    keep it up! :) (Report) Reply

  • Eileen J. Hudson (7/28/2008 11:28:00 AM)

    The name is exactly what this poem is, Beautiful. You can feel the beauty in every word and letter. Steven, you did a wonderful and spectacular poem-I really mean what I say. Thank you for sharing it. (Report) Reply

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