Beautiful Poem by Deborah Cromer

Beautiful

Rating: 4.6


What night was given in beautiful trust
Engulfed with kisses, touching and lust
Your mouth so strong, and filled with passion
Devouring my body in pleasing fashion
My heart so weak, and ready to break
This night with you was all it could take
Now you have my heart and soul in your hands
My mind and body, willing to meet demands
Thank you, thank you so very, very much
All loving actions of your body, have the healing touch
This life I am yours to do as you ask
Loving you completely, is not a task
Your words in my ear, your touch on my skin
Beautiful like Heaven, so far away from sin
Our bodies together, one love does form
Your breathing was heavy, so deep and warm
Places on my body, never kissed so much before
Each taste so much hungrier for more
Sounds of strongest pleasure, so living and free
You give me life, when you make love to me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 14 September 2009

the words emitted the meanings has great impact on the reader! beautiful! ! 10+

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Fay Slimm 21 September 2009

This took my breath away Deborah - - just beautiful........10 + + + Fay

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Bob Blackwell 19 August 2009

A beautiful and passionate poem written in tribute to someone you love. ! 0+

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Beker john 19 August 2009

nice poem full of passion 10

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Lynda Robson 21 August 2009

Passionate and written with love, well penned 10 Lynda x

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Andrew Blakemore 24 October 2019

I loved this one, very well written.

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Prabir Gayen 20 December 2018

Sensuous par excellence...love poem ultimate

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Prabir Gayen 20 December 2018

Beautiful verse...... Blue blood you have

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 January 2016

Now you have my heart and soul in your hands My mind and body, willing to meet demands Thank you, thank you so very, very much All loving actions of your body, have the healing touch This life I am yours to do as you ask.. very passionate and full of love and engulfed in lovely satisfaction . thank you for this love poem. tony

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Chinedu Dike 02 March 2015

The piece is absolutely marvellous. A powerful romantic poem, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and penned with insight. I enjoyed it so much. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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