Beautiful Poem by Mel Emelda

Beautiful

Rating: 4.9


I pray for God for flower
but He gave me a cactus full of thorns
I pray for butterfly
but He gave me a caterpillar
I feel sad and disappointed
but then
the cactus yield flowers and
the caterpillar became a beautiful butterfly

That is God way
beautiful at the time

God will not give us what we hope
but He gave us what we need

Sometimes we feel sad,
disappointed and being hurt but far from that
He makes the best for our life
sumptuous and
Beautiful! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aziz Alkaabi 22 June 2009

This is a very interesting twist. Our shortsightedness versus the wisdom of heavens. Good work.

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Eyelizabeth Unknown 23 June 2009

sweetly put and i hope you continue on your journey admiring what is before you... gaining what you long for.....

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Katu Roy 23 June 2009

Nice n excellent my dear. The reality of idaeas u hav i pleased. Plz read my poems also n coments. Thx

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Angelic Warrior 23 June 2009

so very true....god does things in strange ways......but his gifts will always turn out for the better....well said :) ......an excellent first poem: D 10++

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Luwi Habte 23 June 2009

yes you ar right God is god all the time thanks for sharing God bless you sister luwi

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Ramesh Rai 16 April 2015

Nicely penned. Keep writing

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Charity Nduhiu 15 December 2014

Gods ways are not our ways. Nice poem

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Ugly turned into beauty. Nicely woven. But the flip side ‘ugly-beauty’ expecting form you next time. And ten dr. sakti

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 10 July 2009

Interesting poem! God knows what we deserve.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 05 July 2009

God will not give us what we hope but He gave us what we need......................yet it is most beautiful as u blaze the glory of God, yes God bestow on what we really deserve but not what we desire, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Mel Emelda

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