Beautiful Day Poem by Clarie Sweet

Beautiful Day

Rating: 5.0


After a hectic day of lectures and essays I lay in the grass and stare into the space

Then I slowly dosed off or I think that was the case and woke up in a field with a wooden fence blocking the sun from my face

Bees buzzing around the tree top making a pleasant noise
The sun beaming down and the wind wrestling through the trees

Then I notice leaves dancing in the wind
As I watched them I slowly dosed off again
And woke up to the sound of my dad calling me in.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 08 April 2009

A beautiful day sometimes reveals freshness on a tired being.........The imagery of what you witnessed has been put nicely in words............10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 March 2009

Beautiful day dreaming......... A nice write indeed. Keep on laying in nature's lap and dreaming and writing, Amber. Best Wishes Naseer

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