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beautiful girl

beautiful girl, beautiful girl
you are so powerful
beautiful girl, beautiful girl
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  • marvin brato (10/24/2013 7:10:00 AM)

    Lovestruck you are...supposed!

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  • Patricia Grantham (2/11/2013 8:08:00 AM)

    Ruined by love, we can all relate to that. Good poem. Thanks

  • Zarine Selin (1/26/2013 11:58:00 PM)

    what do you mean actually

  • Neetha Sasidharan (11/20/2012 8:18:00 AM)

    wee but cute poem..kp writing...

  • Scarlett Outlaw (11/19/2012 4:16:00 AM)

    I loved it! ! It sounds like you really like a girl - tell her if you do! ! :)

  • * Sunprincess * (11/18/2012 9:27:00 PM)

    oh rigzin..some beautiful girls love to talk to guys also..so just be yourself
    and don't let anyone's beauty keep you from being their friend..maybe if
    you be a friend to her she will also be your friend..enjoyed this one. :)

  • Hazel Durham (11/18/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    Powerful poem with a sad ending, this is a plea from the heart, how beauty can destroy so easily!

  • Unwritten Soul (11/18/2012 5:56:00 AM)

    Ah! So simple but you did express what you want tell more..it will be more sweeter if you add some detail, , , But Rigzin this is a good work! keep writing and try smething new in every write, and challenge yourself to do better each time for new write..you can do it! _Soul

  • Aung Si (11/18/2012 3:32:00 AM)

    Good! By using the word beautiful girl again and again, your poem is so strong what u'd like to highlight.Thanks for inviting me.I give u vote 8.

  • Shiela Marie Anunciacion (11/17/2012 6:15:00 AM)

    I must agree with Saadat Tahir, it's almost like a nursery rhyme... well versed and well written, easily memorized and easily imagine... a beautiful girl who captured the poet's heart and now he is ruin for other girls.. simple and innocent but with hidden power. Good job!

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