We loved eachother
Our hearts were warm
You loved me
I loved you back
But the sands of time
Made our love lack
I needed you
And hated you also
We screamed, we yelled
Our mutual hatred swelled
The day finally came
When you handed back your token
The emotion inside had finally woken
My spirit was broken
I became a shell
Wishing you would burn in hell
I wanted so bad to scream and yell
My mind has been set up after all
I swallow my demon, and then I fall
Wow...this was a very emotional poem. I really like this one too. Such strong feelings, but in a good way. Great poem
what did the love lack as a result of the sands of time? what was the token she gave back? The feeling and intensity is good.
This is a new theme; I like it. It's simple, but very sincere. My heart goes out to you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You can feel the honesty, and this I love.