hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 35,295 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Beautiful Or Handsome - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Handsome man can win queen’s heart
As there lies wisdom with brilliance as an art
Same way beautiful womanhood can play impossible
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Comments about Beautiful Or Handsome by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (9/30/2013 1:46:00 PM)

    the true beauty lies deep within the heart. a great write (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 35,295 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2013 10:46:00 AM)

    apocalyptic

    Shang Clevenger33 minutes ago
    This is a very enticing and mysterious poem. I very much enjoyed it.
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    Good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,295 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2013 10:46:00 AM)

    Scott Moulthrop19 minutes ago
    I really enjoyed this philosphical piece, though several of your comparisons give me pause. At the beginning you seem to be stating that we are fixated on surfaces, making our judgements. Then it seems to say we give our surfaces their solidity intentionally, with the goal of hiding darkness. Lastly, you turn to things we have lost, or will lose, to imagination itself and end with emptiness. I think though, you miss the point that we are striving for a perfection we can never reach, an idea of happiness. And, perhaps, that is all the meaning and reason we need.
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    nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,295 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2013 10:46:00 AM)

    Anna Carter40 minutes ago
    I liked this, made me think of the saying, things aren't always as they seem! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,295 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2013 9:54:00 AM)

    Handsome man can win queen’s heart
    As there lies wisdom with brilliance as an art (Report) Reply








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