Beautiful Phantom Poem by Alexander Steen Stewart
Beautiful Phantom
A heart once broken leads one's eyes to roam,
Just as mine did one Winter day,
My youth ravished eyes swept the room,
And saw her standing, a beautiful cliché;
She turned, and sunlight seemed to shine on me,
Her eyes met mine and a fire blazed,
Unbeknownst to me, my heart's decree;
Standing there, she smiled, leaving me amazed.
With shoulders squared and breathing stilled,
I made to walk to her,
But sudden panic in my heart filled;
I had blinked and she had left. I could not find her there.
I still catch glimpse of her from time to time,
That’s when my heart sings love's anthem,
The spell she cast has no reason nor rhyme,
Still yet I can’t forget that beautiful phantom.
the heart needs wants more than the body it is a dream not be for filled
wow, , this is the great one too! love it, , feels a cupid shot his arrow, , love on the first sight? ? ? hehehe, , , clear and simple... but strong feel... love it so much... Naru Kaede, ,
Thank you so much for commenting on mine! Yours was fun to read and I gave it also an 8!
Truly a very beautiful piece written. Full of mystery very well done.
A very mysterious write full of longing and suspense...an enchanting poem. Great work, Alexander! Caroline
BEAUTIFUL! ! Wow she seems sooo mysterious. I hope you find her one day.... ^_^ the way you described the whole situation made me feel like i was right there...the suspense of him having the courage to go over to her but then her not be there? ? nice Tyease
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Oh yes! We all looked great at seventeen! LOL Take a look at her mother and you will see what she will look like in the years ahead! LOL Just kidding around with you! Beautiful words indeed. Ten! Linda Across the sea!