Beautifully Hurt Poem by sania harris

Beautifully Hurt

Rating: 5.0


You said you shall stay
The next moment you are gone
You tell me not to fray
And I wait till every dawn

Then it clicks me that you left me
Like a fool I sit and cry
I get down on my knee
And wish I would just die

I take whatever comes in my way
And fling it across the room
I get pleasure when it breaks
‘Coz I am broken and others should too

I stand in a corner and hit my head
My strength might break the wall
My bloods all gone and I feel so dead
I look up and scream “why? ”

Poems I pen and I write and I write
But nothing heals this freaking pain
I close all the curtains and sit in the dark
And smile as my pain slowly drains

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 25 January 2009

Good strong write Sania...well done...thank you

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Kesav Easwaran 26 January 2009

smiling out the pain...yes...that is the best way to heal a wound...especially a love wound...words beautifully expressive, Sania...nice write...10

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Sebastine Humaemo 26 January 2009

ahh Sania much poignant write.....such a painful lines, made me freezed for a sec.........te way yu ended the last line s awesome....lines with feelings straight from the heart.....10+++ sebastine

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Sebastine Humaemo 26 January 2009

lines penned with mixed emotions...........a complete combination of love, care mixed with depart n tears...........10+++ sebastine

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Allan Macli Borges 27 January 2009

strong words for a strong poem. powerful and beautiful...10!

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

And smile as my pain slowly drains Rachel Ann Butler

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Sabrina Jubahar 06 February 2009

This 'beautifully hurt' is beautifully written..

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Muhammad Ali 05 February 2009

reading your poem down and enjoying, happy when it ended in a smile. very good

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Kassem Oude 02 February 2009

I like this poem, it reminds me my teenage. Very hard reaction and successful slow down.

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This is so strong a poem. I hope you don't really hit your head. Get pillows and get the pain and anger out this way. Excellent work! Karin Anderson

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