Beauty Poem by Opsy Coucchy

Beauty

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Beauty
Blonde hairs, blue eyes and bell shaped body
Is that what you call beauty?
Brown eyes, braided hairs and skinny body
Is that what you prefer?
Wait! Are these real beauties or just some burning youthful lust?
Sit and learn from the elders who have seen it all
Real Beauty transcends the physical
Real Beauty is rhetorical
Real Beauty corrodes like a chemical
Real Beauty eludes every racial barrier
It is that which makes you wonder
How sweet and splendid are you Beauty?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Olorundare Tiwatope 28 April 2016

Nice write up

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Opsy Coucchy 06 February 2008

Thanks for all your comments. Critics are welcome too.

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Mary Gordley 06 February 2008

Nice write. Yes, the exterior is only the gift wrap. As for true beauty, in both women and men, that comes from the inside. Thanks for a poem with such truth.

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Philip Housiaux 05 February 2008

Very good work - it is the quality of the insights on beauty that really set this poem off for me. thanks

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